starsandsea: (S/B - Elements)
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Title: Dawn
Rating: PG
Characters/Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Word Count: 182
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: For [livejournal.com profile] rai_daydreamer's birthday! Happy Birthday, Rai! *glomps* Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. :)



Dawn was slowly breaking. Batman looked up at the sky, the inky darkness turning to a deep, dark blue, with a line of light on the horizon.

Lights glittered in the darkness. Across the bay, Metropolis sparkled with bright lights. Gotham sulked in pools of orange and yellow.

Batman stood on the edge of a building and waited. His breath turned white in the cold air. It felt harsh in his lungs, but he smiled.

The sky slowly lightened; day was fast overtaking night.

He came from over the sea, a figure in blue and red, touched by the dawn, glowing. Batman didn't take his eyes off him, as he drew closer and closer. He smiled, and then suddenly the man in blue and red was in front of him, eyes glowing like stars, filling everywhere with light, though the sun had not yet risen.

He took Batman's hand, raising it to his lips, and he could feel the warmth, even through the leather of his glove.

They smiled, and stepped into each other's arms as the sun spilled over the horizon.

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Date: 2010-01-09 07:46 pm (UTC)
bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (flower crowns 2))
From: [personal profile] bradygirl_12
Absolutely gorgeous imagery, Star! :)

I was especially fond of this:

He came from over the sea, a figure in blue and red, touched by the dawn, glowing. Batman didn't take his eyes off him, as he drew closer and closer. He smiled, and then suddenly the man in blue and red was in front of him, eyes glowing like stars, filling everywhere with light, though the sun had not yet risen.

And the hand kiss!

*melts*

:)

(no subject)

Date: 2010-01-10 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm really glad you liked it, Brady! :D And those lines you picked out were some of my favorites as well. And the hand kiss! I couldn't resist that!

Thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-09 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com
Simply stunning! *loves* ^____^

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it! :D

And thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-09 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com
Lights glittered in the darkness. Across the bay, Metropolis sparkled with bright lights. Gotham sulked in pools of orange and yellow.
That was amazing description of Metropolis and Gotham!

His breath turned white in the cold air. It felt harsh in his lungs, but he smiled.
I liked the smile. (And I found myself with a smile on my face as well. :))

He came from over the sea, a figure in blue and red, touched by the dawn, glowing. Batman didn't take his eyes off him, as he drew closer and closer. He smiled, and then suddenly the man in blue and red was in front of him, eyes glowing like stars, filling everywhere with light, though the sun had not yet risen.
That was so AWESOME! Wonderfully written!

They smiled, and stepped into each other's arms as the sun spilled over the horizon.
Perfect ending!

I loved it so much! Great job!
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked the descriptions of Metropolis and Gotham! I had a lot of fun thinking those up. :)

And I'm also so pleased you liked the part where Superman appears before Batman! I think that was my favorite part. :)

Thank you for your lovely comment! :D


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Date: 2010-01-09 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyblkrose.livejournal.com
Such rich imagery and depth of emotion is such an economy of words. Both lovely and beautiful. Thank you for sharing this, Rai is one lucky gal to have a friend like you write this for her.

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
*blushes* Awww, I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-10 12:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com
awwww! this is absolutely gorgeous!! <3

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so pleased you liked it!

And thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-10 02:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] patrese1.livejournal.com
Lovely!
Edited Date: 2010-01-10 02:34 am (UTC)

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

And thank you for commenting, too! :)

I love your icon, btw. :D

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Date: 2010-01-10 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hitokaji.livejournal.com
Sweet and beautiful! Love the imgery here, my dear! :)

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so pleased you liked it, Hito! :D

Thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-10 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
What a gorgeous moment! I love how Bruce's emotions seem to spill over like the light when Clark appears...

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
I'm so happy you liked this, Jen! :)

*pets Bruce and Clark*

Thank you for commenting! :)

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rai-daydreamer.livejournal.com
Awww, this was so beautiful and sweet, Star!
I can easily see the image of the city beginning to be filled with the flood of sunlight and Bruce basking in the glow of his own sun. :)
The affection and the hotness of the boys a little lessened even the coldness of Gotham! *g*

Thank you very much, Star! this was wonderful birthday gift! *glomps*

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Date: 2010-01-10 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
The affection and the hotness of the boys a little lessened even the coldness of Gotham! *g*

LOL, yes it did! :D

*dances* Yay! I'm so happy you liked it, Rai! :D I was thinking of giving you something from the Angels verse, but it's still a little rough, so I decided to save that for another time. :)

*glomps* I'm so glad you liked it, Rai! And happy birthday! :D

zoe

Date: 2010-03-25 02:34 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
¡Beautiful!

Re: zoe

Date: 2010-03-26 07:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Awww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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