Drabble: Triad (3)

[starsandsea]

Title: Triad (3)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Clark/Bruce/Michael
Word Count: 194
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Companion to Triad 1 and Triad 2. For the amazing vigilante_wake! *snugs* Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct.



Clark watched his lovers sleeping. Bruce had his arm across his chest, lying on his front, his body pressed up close against him; Michael was in a similar position, curled around Bruce.

Clark sighed softly, seeing his breath rustle Bruce's hair slightly. Bruce was smiling in his sleep. Clark smiled upon it seeing it, such a rare sight, and yet more common now, around him and Michael at least.

He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day. A gentle, cool breeze caressed the bed, and both Bruce and Michael pressed closer to him. It was still dark in the room, but dawn was just beginning to lighten the darkness; brush strokes of color around the edges.

Clark sighed again, looking forward to the moment when the sun would rise and he could feel its touch upon his skin. But until then, he was content to watch as its fingers caressed his lovers, smoothing away any lines of stress or worry, hiding scars, or limning them with gold.

Clark smiled.

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

What a beautiful piece, Star! :)

I love your descriptions of what Clark hears in the early morning, and the peacefulness he's found with his two lovers. I especially liked Bruce smiling in his sleep. :)

[saavikam77.livejournal.com]

Awww!!! ^_^ I love Clark watching Bruce and Michael sleep.

[anthraciteowl.livejournal.com]

Beautiful.

liming them with gold
I think you mean limning, here.

[arch-schatten.livejournal.com]

Awww! this was such a sweet piece. I love the image of the three of them sleeping together, or, Bruce and Michael sleeping, and Clark watching them. And I want to know what Bruce is dreaming of, is he's smiling! Tricky Bat, you never know with him X)

[genclay.livejournal.com]

Lovly lovly image :)

[jij.livejournal.com]

He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day.

Mmm, I love the mix of morning sounds and how much Clark enjoys them in this sweet quiet moment. You capture the hush of morning so well...

[meteor-seven.livejournal.com]

This is sweet :D
I found lots of threesome around the market these days...ppl are getting kinky, lol, but I like it as long as they are happy ;P

[vigilante-wake.livejournal.com]

You know who rules? You! For writing this!

You know who sucks? Me! For taking so long to reply!

For the amazing vigilante_wake! *snugs*

Meep! *blushes* Thank you so much! You've been so supportive for the past couple of months or so when I've been struggling with my real life. I feel so bad that I haven't had the time to really read or comment on fic, but I'm very lucky to have friends who love me anyway! Especially you! *hugs*

He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day.

I think that's my favorite sentence from this fic! Your writing makes me visualize it so perfectly!

Clark sighed again, looking forward to the moment when the sun would rise and he could feel its touch upon his skin.

Clark/sun OTP. Seriously. I love reading about the effect the sunlight has on Superman. It's so sensual! And then the next sentence in that paragraph is so beautiful! The entire fic is lovely!

Thank you so much for writing this! These three pieces are really wonderful!

[sasha-anu.livejournal.com]

I love your description of the sunlight. I also love how willing Clark is to share first his lover (Bruce) and now the sunlight.