Drabble: Valentine's Day

[starsandsea]

Title: Valentine's Day
Rating: PG
Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Word Count: 117
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. Happy Valentine's Day, everyone! And thank you to the very kind anon who gave me a Virtual Gift! *glomps*





Another Valentine's Day had been and gone. Bruce had gone to work. So had Clark. Situations around the world required Superman's presence. Bruce had a power lunch. Clark had written up stories and done research.

Bruce had left work early, to knowing looks and winks. Clark had left late, no one else still working to give him pitying looks.

Superman went on patrol, stopping in at the Watchtower to ensure there were no alien threats. Batman had got to work on the dark streets of Gotham, breaking up a gang war.

Superman finally went home around 2am. Batman did only as dawn was touching the horizon.

They only had time for a brief kiss. It was enough.

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

Aww, perfect! Busy lives, but the love is there. :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

The love is definitely there!

Thank you for commenting, Brady! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[lilacs-roses.livejournal.com]

Bittersweet... but at least they got that kiss :)

Nicely done :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm really glad you liked it!

Thank you for commenting! :)

[saavikam77.livejournal.com]

Oh, BOYS!

This was perfectly bittersweet, hon.

Happy Valentines Day! *smishes*

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm really glad you liked it!

I hope you had a good Valentine's Day!

And thank you for commenting! :)

[ilovetobefree.livejournal.com]

Bruce had left work early, to knowing looks and winks. Clark had left late, no one else still working to give him pitying looks.
That was perfectly written!

Superman went on patrol, stopping in at the Watchtower to ensure there were no alien threats. Batman had got to work on the dark streets of Gotham, breaking up a gang war.
YAY, you mentioned the Watchtower – great! :)

They only had time for a brief kiss. It was enough.
Oh, poor boys. *pets them* Glad there was at least time for the kiss.

Thank you so much for this amazing story Star! I enjoyed it! :)
I hope your Valentine’s day wasn’t so busy and you had a wonderful time. *hugs*

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Bruce had left work early, to knowing looks and winks. Clark had left late, no one else still working to give him pitying looks.
That was perfectly written!

You know, that was possibly my favorite part of this fic, so I'm really glad you picked up on it! :)

Oh, poor boys. *pets them* Glad there was at least time for the kiss.

*pets them too*

Thank you for commenting, Lis! I'm really glad you liked it! And I hope you had a good Valentine's Day yourself. :)

[northern-star.livejournal.com]

aw, poor boys...too busy for anything more than a kiss. But it's so sweet that it's enough for them just knowing they have that - clearly they're very much in love. :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

But it's so sweet that it's enough for them just knowing they have that - clearly they're very much in love. :)

LOL, they are. They are indeed. *pets them*

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[mithen.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, I really love what you're doing with structure in your stories lately, and I love the way you work in parallels and opposites in this story that bring them always back together. It's like a dance with one perfect kiss at the heart of it. Just plain lovely.

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, I really love what you're doing with structure in your stories lately

LOL, that's more a coincidence - I wrote this a year ago, but just missed out on Valentine's Day, so I had to wait for this year. But I really enjoyed writing this one, and working the parallels on what Bruce and Clark were doing throughout the day.

Thank you for commenting, Jen! I'm really happy you liked it! :D

[eve-k.livejournal.com]

They only had time for a brief kiss. It was enough.

But you know it was the sweetest, most caring and tender kiss in the world!
:)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

LOL, you do! And it was. :D

Thank you for commenting, Eve! :)