Drabble: Emergency

[starsandsea]

Title: Emergency
Rating: PG
Characters: Pieter Cross
Word Count: 115
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: For my Dr. Mid-Nite table at dcu_freeforall. Prompt of 'Emergency'. Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct! :)



Pieter closed his eyes, his heart beat slowing after it had sped up at the sound the sound of the alarms. Around him, everyone else was doing the same, bringing themselves back from the battle readiness they had entered.

There were groans of disappointment from the younger members of the JSA. (And Ted.)

Pieter opened his eyes again, the now familiar green tinged sight telling him that people were slowly filtering out the room, chatting to each other, going back to what they had been doing.

Charlie fluttered to his shoulder, hooting in his ear loudly, and Pieter smiled, stroking his feathers.

All in all, it was an emergency he liked best: a false one.

Comments

[saavikam77.livejournal.com]

Those are *definitely* the best kinds of emergencies. :)

Love this!

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

They are!

Thank you for commenting, I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[bradygirl_12]

I agree with Pieter! The best kind of emergencies (though Ted disagrees, heh heh)! ;)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

I agree with Pieter too! Ted is disappointed he won't get to hit anything, lol.

Thank you for commenting, Brady! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[mithen.livejournal.com]

There were groans of disappointment from the younger members of the JSA. (And Ted.)

Hah! That is an awesome line, it sums up so much about Ted, lol. I This is a nice little snapshot of group reaction, I like it...

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it, having a little peak at what everyone's reactions would be...

Thank you for commenting, Jen! :D

[fictionalknight.livejournal.com]

Ah, yeah, false alarms and emergencies are certainly the best kind. Poor kids, though...wanting to fight. lol! Nice work, Star! :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

False alarms are the very best kind! :)

Thank you for commenting, I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[shardsofblu.livejournal.com]

Charlie fluttered to his shoulder, hooting in his ear loudly...

And I'd imagine that's a hoot of disappointment too? ;)

I love Pieter just quietly being thankful of a false alarm. :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

And I'd imagine that's a hoot of disappointment too? ;)

LOL, it might be more of a hoot of 'the stupid alarms woke me up and now nothing's going to happen anyway'. :p

Thank you for commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

[ilovetobefree.livejournal.com]

There were groans of disappointment from the younger members of the JSA. (And Ted.)
Oh my...! But I can understand the different feelings about the false alarm in the case of the younger members (and Ted.) :)

Charlie fluttered to his shoulder, hooting in his ear loudly, and Pieter smiled, stroking his feathers.
I liked this line. It’s always so nice to see smiling Pieter with Charlie. :)

All in all, it was an emergency he liked best: a false one.
And I understand Pieter so well. :)

That was beautifully written! I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

I liked this line. It’s always so nice to see smiling Pieter with Charlie. :)

Pieter always smiles when Charlie is around! It's impossible not to!

I had a lot of fun writing this, what everyone's reactions would be, and I totally agree with Pieter, the best emergency is a false one!

Thank you so much for commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! :D