Oh, shifting POV to Bruce here worked really well! It was so great to finally see in side his head after five chapters of only seeing him "from the outside" so to speak.
Bruce held a hand out to him, the man who had saved his life, when he had finally given up, when he knew the last petal would fall today.
Aw! I had wondered why Bruce was so gloomy in the last chapter, but I hadn't realized he was having his final doom...and so stoically, just like Bruce. *pets him*
"I don't know. I don't know what tales there are. But I know that I love you."
I love the simplicity and poetry of these lines, they ring really well! Great job! *hugs*
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Date: 2007-10-10 04:59 am (UTC)Bruce held a hand out to him, the man who had saved his life, when he had finally given up, when he knew the last petal would fall today.
Aw! I had wondered why Bruce was so gloomy in the last chapter, but I hadn't realized he was having his final doom...and so stoically, just like Bruce. *pets him*
"I don't know. I don't know what tales there are. But I know that I love you."
I love the simplicity and poetry of these lines, they ring really well! Great job! *hugs*