I really like the POV change you did there, it's really smooth
It is? Because that's when Clark!Muse said 'I'm going to take control now!', and I was just left helpless... the only thing I could was write... lol, so I'm glad it works okay! :)
He has to shield himself from pain sometimes, no matter how.. and ends up hurting himself further. Because he's a silly, silly Bat.
He is a very silly Bat at times.
(I like to call slice of life 'Sol', since it means 'sun' in spanish :) sunny! warm! preeetty!)
I think you forgot 'shiney!', lol.
They are so tragic!
Oh, they are. I think Harvey is my favorite villain. I'm getting inklings that I'm going to write something from Harvey's POV sometime, but we'll have to wait and see...
Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm very glad you liked it. I hope it helped cheer you up a bit from your real life problems. :) *snuggles back*
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Date: 2007-04-25 07:49 pm (UTC)It is? Because that's when Clark!Muse said 'I'm going to take control now!', and I was just left helpless... the only thing I could was write... lol, so I'm glad it works okay! :)
He has to shield himself from pain sometimes, no matter how.. and ends up hurting himself further. Because he's a silly, silly Bat.
He is a very silly Bat at times.
(I like to call slice of life 'Sol', since it means 'sun' in spanish :) sunny! warm! preeetty!)
I think you forgot 'shiney!', lol.
They are so tragic!
Oh, they are. I think Harvey is my favorite villain. I'm getting inklings that I'm going to write something from Harvey's POV sometime, but we'll have to wait and see...
Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm very glad you liked it. I hope it helped cheer you up a bit from your real life problems. :) *snuggles back*