Drabble: Shower

[starsandsea]

Title: Shower
Rating: PG
Pairing: Clark/Bruce
Word Count: 218
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: For the worlds_finest challenge, Showers.



"Clark. What are we doing out here?"

Clark paused, and looked at his lover. He almost melted into the darkness, wearing only black. His eyes gleamed in the light from the stars above them. He looked beautiful. "We're here because there's something I want you to see."

Bruce huffed. "And what exactly is it? There's nothing here Clark! I don't see why I had to take a night off because of this."

Clark just grinned again, and caught one of Bruce's hands in his own. "Come on, we're almost there."

Bruce grumbled a bit, but allowed himself to be pulled along.

"Here we are!" Clark said, cheerfully. He could feel Bruce's glare.

"There's nothing here, Clark."

Clark reached forward, and pressed a finger to Bruce's lips. "Shh. Be patient. You'll see." Unable to resist, he let his finger caress Bruce's mouth. Bruce sighed. Clark pressed a gentle kiss to his lips, that Bruce slowly responded to. They gradually broke apart, and Clark caught sight of something out of the corner of his eye.

"Look." The sky was full of meteors. He heard Bruce gasp softly. "This is what I wanted you to see. The meteor shower."

Bruce turned to look at him. He was smiling gently. Clark smiled back. Together, they watched the meteor's dance across the sky.

Comments

[bradygirl_12]

*thud* This is *so* lovely!

Man, I couldn't help thinking Smallville with the meteor showers! ;)

But it's so perfect. Clark tolerating Bruce's grumpiness and Bruce going along with Clark's being mysterious. Both are rewarded!

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

I couldn't help thinking Smallville with the meteor showers!

I actually had the impression that they were in Smallville, but they wouldn't tell me for sure.

Clark tolerating Bruce's grumpiness and Bruce going along with Clark's being mysterious. Both are rewarded!

LOL! Yeah, I was trying to make Bruce more Bat like here, not like he usually is in my fluffy fics.

Thank you for the feedback! I'm very glad you liked it. :)

[arch-schatten.livejournal.com]

Awww, that's so sweet! Lol, Superman should be careful with the meteo showers, but I really like the image of both of them together just looking in awe at the sky :) Beautiful imagery, and nothing beats gruff-affectionate Batman :)

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Superman should be careful with the meteo showers,

...

That only occurred me when you pointed it out. *blushes a bit* Errr, well, he's got Bruce with him! Bruce will make sure he's okay. *smiles convincingly*

Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm very glad you liked it.

[greeneyelove.livejournal.com]

Oh this is just perfect! What a great use of the prompt!

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[harmless-one.livejournal.com]

When I clicked the link, I thought I was going to be reading a shower smut drabble. What I got was something much better. Thanks for this sweet and mellow little jewel.

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

When I clicked the link, I thought I was going to be reading a shower smut drabble. What I got was something much better.

LOL! I'm glad it wasn't too disappointing!

Thank you for the feedback!

[jij.livejournal.com]

Awwww...I love seeing what inventive responses people come up for to these prompts, and this was just lovely. *grins happily*

Clark paused, and looked at his lover. He almost melted into the darkness, wearing only black. His eyes gleamed in the light from the stars above them. He looked beautiful.

For some reason, I never, never tire of looking at Bruce through Clark's eyes. He's always so freshly awed, it seems...and I feel it with him. Lovely.

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

For some reason, I never, never tire of looking at Bruce through Clark's eyes. He's always so freshly awed, it seems...and I feel it with him.

That line was one I added in later, and I think it's got to be one of, if not my favorite, line in this fic. :)

Thank you for the feedback, and I'm very glad you liked it.

[sasha-anu.livejournal.com]

I love quiet moments like these, when there's no angst, no drama, and they're just in sync with each other.

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

I love them too! :)

I'm glad you liked it, thank you for the feedback.

[pervyficgirl.livejournal.com]

Aw, this was very sweet and very lovely. I could *feel* Clark's affection for Bruce. It was glorious.

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.

[taro-twist.livejournal.com]

Oh, this was so sweet! I loved this line:

He almost melted into the darkness, wearing only black.

Such a gorgeous way of describing Bruce! And then the kiss was lovely. *squee* And they were watching a meteor shower! That's so magical! *dances about*

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Such a gorgeous way of describing Bruce! And then the kiss was lovely. *squee* And they were watching a meteor shower! That's so magical! *dances about*

lol, I'm glad you liked the description of Bruce, and the kiss! *dances about with you*

Thank you for the feedback. I'm very glad you liked it. :)

[rai-daydreamer.livejournal.com]

I really love them smiling each other gently and affectionately. *^-^*
Clark and Bruce and meteor showers. What a perfect world this is... *sighs happily*
Thanks for sharing your beautiful story!

[starsandsea.livejournal.com]

Clark and Bruce and meteor showers. What a perfect world this is... *sighs happily*

This is a very perfect world, indeed. :)

Thank you very much for the feedback. I'm very glad you liked it.