Drabble: The Darkest Night of the Year
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starsandseaTitle: The Darkest Night of the Year
Rating: PG
Pairing: Batman/Superman
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. :)
It was the darkest night of the year.
Gotham spread out dark below him, with only faint glimmers of distant light. Artificial light, not real at all, really.
Batman turned in Superman’s arms and looked toward the east, to where the very first grey glimmers of dawn lighted the clouds.
From this day on the light would continue to grow, each day would be a little longer, filled with a little more light...
There was a metaphor in there, Batman thought wryly, as he glanced at Superman’s face.
His face that was lit with the very first rays of light.
Rating: PG
Pairing: Batman/Superman
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. :)
It was the darkest night of the year.
Gotham spread out dark below him, with only faint glimmers of distant light. Artificial light, not real at all, really.
Batman turned in Superman’s arms and looked toward the east, to where the very first grey glimmers of dawn lighted the clouds.
From this day on the light would continue to grow, each day would be a little longer, filled with a little more light...
There was a metaphor in there, Batman thought wryly, as he glanced at Superman’s face.
His face that was lit with the very first rays of light.
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Date: 2012-04-15 07:24 pm (UTC)A peaceful, happy scene with wonderful metaphors. You write prose like poetry, m'dear! :)
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Date: 2012-04-16 05:52 pm (UTC)Thank you for commenting! :)
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Date: 2012-04-15 09:10 pm (UTC)You are *so* good at what you write hun!! You really are!!
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Date: 2012-04-16 05:53 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-04-16 03:42 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-04-16 05:54 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for commenting! :)
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Date: 2012-04-16 06:28 pm (UTC)I liked that line so much - Bruce in Clark’s arms looking at the very first glimmers of dawn - that’s such a beautiful image!
His face that was lit with the very first rays of light.
AWWWW!
I so agree with Brady: “You write prose like poetry” - So true!
Excellently written Star! Thank you so much for sharing.
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Date: 2012-04-17 06:20 pm (UTC)I'm very fond of that line myself; Clark must look so gorgeous with the first rays on light on his face. :)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lis! I'm so happy you liked this little story! :)
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Date: 2012-04-19 05:31 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2012-04-19 06:06 pm (UTC)Thank you for commenting!