Drabble: Gotham and Sunlight
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starsandseaDrabble: Gotham and Sunlight
Rating: PG
Characters: Clark, Gotham (hint of Clark/Bruce)
Word Count: 119
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. :)
Gotham was sparkling in the early morning sunlight. It didn't seem right, Gotham and sunlight, let alone 'sparkling'. But there had been a heavy frost overnight, and so, the city was gleaming.
Clark looked, bemused, out of the window of Bruce's mid-town apartment. Wayne Tower dominated the skyline, its sharp point gleaming like the point of a sword. All the other buildings were its knights, ready to do its bidding.
Clark shook his head with a wry twist of his lips. This was why he hated mind control; he thought like this for days afterward. Still... perhaps he could start to see the appeal Gotham had for Bruce.
The city gleamed for a moment below him, like a wink.
Rating: PG
Characters: Clark, Gotham (hint of Clark/Bruce)
Word Count: 119
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct. :)
Gotham was sparkling in the early morning sunlight. It didn't seem right, Gotham and sunlight, let alone 'sparkling'. But there had been a heavy frost overnight, and so, the city was gleaming.
Clark looked, bemused, out of the window of Bruce's mid-town apartment. Wayne Tower dominated the skyline, its sharp point gleaming like the point of a sword. All the other buildings were its knights, ready to do its bidding.
Clark shook his head with a wry twist of his lips. This was why he hated mind control; he thought like this for days afterward. Still... perhaps he could start to see the appeal Gotham had for Bruce.
The city gleamed for a moment below him, like a wink.
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Date: 2011-10-23 06:53 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-10-24 05:53 pm (UTC)*hugs* Thank you for commenting!
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Date: 2011-10-23 07:24 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-10-24 05:54 pm (UTC)Thank you for commenting! :)
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Date: 2011-10-23 08:07 pm (UTC)Well, Gotham and sunlight may not sound right, but I love the image of sparkling Gotham. :) And those lines about Wayne Tower were so wonderfully written!
Still... perhaps he could start to see the appeal Gotham had for Bruce.
Well said. :)
The city gleamed for a moment below him, like a wink.
Perfect!
I agree with those other two comments - that was brilliant! Wonderful job Star! Thank you so much for sharing this. :)
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Date: 2011-10-24 05:55 pm (UTC)It's a strange to imagine, isn't it? But I did like those lines about Wayne Tower myself. :)
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lis! I'm glad you liked this! :D
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Date: 2011-10-23 09:02 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-10-24 05:56 pm (UTC)LOL!!! I'm not sure Clark agrees with you... :p
Thank you for commenting, Saavi, I'm really glad you liked this! :)
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Date: 2011-10-23 09:51 pm (UTC)So Clark gets all flowery after mind control? ;)
Beautiful imagery, Star! I can imagine Gotham sparkling with frost and the impressive Wayne Tower and its Knights! ;)
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Date: 2011-10-24 05:56 pm (UTC)Apparently so, yes! *pets him*
Thank you for commenting, Brady, I'm so glad you liked this! :)
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Date: 2011-10-24 05:47 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2011-10-24 05:57 pm (UTC)Thank you for commenting, Jen! I'm so glad you liked this! :D