But because the Sun was the bright light at the center of everything, keeping all in place with its gravity. Because he was dark and mysterious, one half constantly in shadow, the other lit with the Sun's brilliance, lighting it, making it glow and give out a gentle light of its own. That was brilliant!
The Moon and Sun, the two constants, forever dancing, pulling together and apart. Perfect!
But always, always, they danced, the two of the them, the Moon and Sun, chasing each other across the sky. Great ending!
You did such an amazing job with those descriptions of Clark as the Sun and Bruce as the Moon Star! That was so beautifully written and so fitting. I loved it. Thank you very much for sharing this story. :)
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Date: 2011-05-16 11:09 pm (UTC)Because he was dark and mysterious, one half constantly in shadow, the other lit with the Sun's brilliance, lighting it, making it glow and give out a gentle light of its own.
That was brilliant!
The Moon and Sun, the two constants, forever dancing, pulling together and apart.
Perfect!
But always, always, they danced, the two of the them, the Moon and Sun, chasing each other across the sky.
Great ending!
You did such an amazing job with those descriptions of Clark as the Sun and Bruce as the Moon Star! That was so beautifully written and so fitting. I loved it. Thank you very much for sharing this story. :)