*dances* Awww, yay, I'm so glad you liked this, Jen! *glomps you*
The atmosphere at the beginning is breathtaking--you capture the feel of a bleak but beautiful seascape so perfectly--the gulls and shells and wind.
The beach actually exists - and so does everything else, even the castle! I could not resist setting this there, so I found it very easy to describe the sea scape, and the feelings it evokes.
Oh, and I really love how you have both of them inspire each other--how Bruce is inspired by the tales he hears, but how Clark is in turn convinced to become an active hero by Bruce. You kept it perfectly balanced, and I know that's a challenge!
I really loved the idea of them inspiring each other! I think they both just needed that extra little nudge to become what they're supposed to be.
Wow, I can see that so clearly, and Bruce would make SUCH a perfect demon in a world that kind of believed in them. How awesome! I really loved this, thank you so much!
Hee, I love the image of demon!Bruce, but of course, he's still human underneath... *pets him*
*glomps you again* I'm so glad you liked this, Jen! Thank you so much for commenting! :)
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Date: 2011-04-26 06:24 pm (UTC)The atmosphere at the beginning is breathtaking--you capture the feel of a bleak but beautiful seascape so perfectly--the gulls and shells and wind.
The beach actually exists - and so does everything else, even the castle! I could not resist setting this there, so I found it very easy to describe the sea scape, and the feelings it evokes.
Oh, and I really love how you have both of them inspire each other--how Bruce is inspired by the tales he hears, but how Clark is in turn convinced to become an active hero by Bruce. You kept it perfectly balanced, and I know that's a challenge!
I really loved the idea of them inspiring each other! I think they both just needed that extra little nudge to become what they're supposed to be.
Wow, I can see that so clearly, and Bruce would make SUCH a perfect demon in a world that kind of believed in them. How awesome! I really loved this, thank you so much!
Hee, I love the image of demon!Bruce, but of course, he's still human underneath... *pets him*
*glomps you again* I'm so glad you liked this, Jen! Thank you so much for commenting! :)