AWWWWWWWW! That was such a marvelous story Star! Clark and Bruce were amazing! You wrote Clark’s relationship with his parents wonderfully. Martha and Jonathan - they both were so loving, understanding, supportive. And the way you wrote Luthor... and how Clark and Bruce were working together to make him lower the levies - that was excellently done. The mention of Lana and Pete, the scene with Clark saving the girl - that was perfect. You’ve totally made my day! Thank you very much for writing this story! :)
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Date: 2011-04-25 05:40 am (UTC)AWWWWWWWW! That was such a marvelous story Star! Clark and Bruce were amazing! You wrote Clark’s relationship with his parents wonderfully. Martha and Jonathan - they both were so loving, understanding, supportive. And the way you wrote Luthor... and how Clark and Bruce were working together to make him lower the levies - that was excellently done. The mention of Lana and Pete, the scene with Clark saving the girl - that was perfect. You’ve totally made my day! Thank you very much for writing this story! :)