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Date: 2010-07-27 11:29 am (UTC)
"Bruce?" Clark looks at him, confusion and wariness and pain and a little anger in his eyes.
Excellent description of Clark’s feelings!

Do you really think that I'd give up that easily, Clark?" Clark stares at him, eyes vivid. "Who could ever be better for me than you?" Clark opens his mouth, a flush spreading across his face again.
I loved that! Loved the way you described Clark there.

Clark gazes back, then smiles. "I trust you, Bruce. I trust you."
Perfect!
It was beautiful! It was amazing how determined was Bruce to convince Clark. And the ending was wonderfully done!
This story just fixed everything!
Thank you very much for sharing. :)
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