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Date: 2010-05-30 08:07 pm (UTC)
The sand was a golden yellow, under the weak sunlight. A cold wind was blowing fresh off the sea, and the clouds in the distance would bring rain, later. On the surf, Ace and Krypto rolled over and over, mock fighting; pouncing and biting, then leaping into the sea, barking wildly.
Wonderful description. And the image of Ace and Krypto playing together is so cute. :)

"Krpyto's using super speed." There was a pout to Bruce's voice.
Clark scrutinized the dogs. "No, he's not."
"Yes."
Clark rolled his eyes. "All right, maybe a little."

:D I totally loved this dialogue! :)

The white dog woofed happily, licked his face, then shook himself vigorously, spraying him with cold water and sand.
*grins*

He knew exactly what he was going to say. "I know, I know, I should train him better."
:D :D :D

Bruce's smirk would have grown, he just knew it. Sighing, he opened his eyes, stood, and threw the tree, to Krpyto's ecstatic yelps.
Awesome! :)

AWWWWWW! That was so beautiful story! I so loved Clark here. His concern about Bruce, the kiss, his behavior to Krypto. He was totally amazing! :)
You made me smile and brightened my Sunday evening.
Thank you very much for sharing this! :)
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