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Date: 2009-11-12 03:57 pm (UTC)
Title: Every Party

Awesome story! I liked the way you described Clark working with his super hearing!
And you perfectly captured the difference between him being able to avoid an attention of people as „invisible reporter“ or flying away as Superman and Bruce being always the centre of attention! That was excellently written!

He'd escape in a minute. Just like they did at every party.
Wonderful ending! :)

Title: The Eyes of Truth

But Bruce touched his hands and they fell away, as did the rest of the world when the freed man took a deep breath, like he was awaking from a long sleep, and opened his eyes.
That was great! Excellent description of Bruce on the rescue mission.

But they are smiling, small secret smiles, and their eyes are alight, whether masked or free to the world, because each knows what the other saw in them.
I loved it! The smile, the eyes and the knowledge – that was amazing!

And when they meet still later, their smiles deepen as they look in each others eyes. And see the truth reflected there, as it will always be.
Again - perfect ending!

I enjoyed both the stories a lot!
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.
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