Ohh, what a bittersweet fic. *wibble* As Saavi said, the contrast between Bruce being sick and the gorgeous spring day is really striking.
Ahhh, the future is going to be so sad:
But not the same, for the loss of Bruce would forever mark them both, Clark especially.
*sniff* Although I loved this line:
They had been best friends for so long now, longer than many modern marriages lasted...
*squee* And I just loved the image of all of them lying in the sun--Diana watching the gardens, Clark with his glasses off, and Bruce beneath the blanket on the cushioned swing (yay cushioned swings! I think that was my favorite detail :D).
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Date: 2008-05-23 02:21 am (UTC)Ahhh, the future is going to be so sad:
But not the same, for the loss of Bruce would forever mark them both, Clark especially.
*sniff* Although I loved this line:
They had been best friends for so long now, longer than many modern marriages lasted...
*squee* And I just loved the image of all of them lying in the sun--Diana watching the gardens, Clark with his glasses off, and Bruce beneath the blanket on the cushioned swing (yay cushioned swings! I think that was my favorite detail :D).
Great job!