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Date: 2009-05-08 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Yay! I'm so glad you like it! This story is one of my favorites. :)

I really indulged myself, having Kal being the only one who could understand Bruce! *hearts them*

Eh, nitpick- in the first paragraph - the bed is so softthat what? you need a that there. It's a pet peeve of mine.

I'm... afraid I don't understand. Do you mean it should be 'the mattress that was so soft'? I'm not good at English... :)
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