This chapter was sooo good! I love the dynamic created by Bruce not being able to speak to Kal. Thank goodness Kal seems to understand!
It's so interesting having one of the characters unable to talk. Yay for Kal understanding!
I just love how caring and sympathetic and generous Kal is here. Yay for getting Bruce and Ace out of the cave! And Ace was so adorable here--I love how you describe all of his actions, the snuffling and the soulful eyes. So so so cute. *huggles the puppy*
*huggles Kal* He is really just being so good in this story! Insisting on not leaving Bruce behind, of looking after him... *pets him* LOL, Ace is too adorable to not describe all of his actions! I really liked him snuggling Kal's gloves - I think it's one of my favorite parts of the whole story, lol!
All the descriptions were gorgeous--I could see it so clearly when Kal was blocking the entrance to the cave. And his sunny smiles and "frighteningly blue eyes" (such a good description of his eyes!) *swoon*
I could see all of this story so clearly in my minds eye, I'm so glad it came across!
Ohh, and I love how you worked Martha in here as the kind serving lady, while Jor-El and Lara are the disapproving parents. That seems very in character for them. :)
*grins* Martha was just there when Kal took Bruce home and insisted on fussing over him. :p
And Bruce is being called Blaidd! Yay for nicknames that mean wolf!
Yay indeed! I wanted to call him Bat, but I couldn't find it my Welsh dictionary, lol!
Thank you for your wonderful comment! There should be more next week. :)
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Date: 2008-05-17 06:56 pm (UTC)This chapter was sooo good! I love the dynamic created by Bruce not being able to speak to Kal. Thank goodness Kal seems to understand!
It's so interesting having one of the characters unable to talk. Yay for Kal understanding!
I just love how caring and sympathetic and generous Kal is here. Yay for getting Bruce and Ace out of the cave! And Ace was so adorable here--I love how you describe all of his actions, the snuffling and the soulful eyes. So so so cute. *huggles the puppy*
*huggles Kal* He is really just being so good in this story! Insisting on not leaving Bruce behind, of looking after him... *pets him* LOL, Ace is too adorable to not describe all of his actions! I really liked him snuggling Kal's gloves - I think it's one of my favorite parts of the whole story, lol!
All the descriptions were gorgeous--I could see it so clearly when Kal was blocking the entrance to the cave. And his sunny smiles and "frighteningly blue eyes" (such a good description of his eyes!) *swoon*
I could see all of this story so clearly in my minds eye, I'm so glad it came across!
Ohh, and I love how you worked Martha in here as the kind serving lady, while Jor-El and Lara are the disapproving parents. That seems very in character for them. :)
*grins* Martha was just there when Kal took Bruce home and insisted on fussing over him. :p
And Bruce is being called Blaidd! Yay for nicknames that mean wolf!
Yay indeed! I wanted to call him Bat, but I couldn't find it my Welsh dictionary, lol!
Thank you for your wonderful comment! There should be more next week. :)