I'm with Saavikam, this was surprisingly un-crackish! And very beautiful and moving! *looks deeply impressed*
"I..." he starts, then has to swallow before starting again. "I... have to. No one else is here." His answer doesn't seem like enough, it's hardly a reason to him, but the blonde smiles at him, a small, delighted smile this time.
"A good reason."
Awwwww. I really, really love your Dick here. He's so noble and good and lonely without being mawkish about it...
Their taking turns surprising each other and being annoyed at being surprised was both funny and touching at the same time.
The kiss was incredible! So intense and delicate...*swoons*
He turns to look at him, and his eyes are filled with pain and world-weariness. But then they brighten. "It will be worth it."
Gorgeous, Star! Just gorgeous! Imagining Legolas glowing in the grimy streets of Gotham has totally made my day! I love this story!
Two tiny typo catches: "He's defiantly glowing now, and the beauty of it and him take his breath away," should be "definitely" and "My heart is going to be scared again." should be "scarred." Which is another very beautiful line, by the way!
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Date: 2007-11-30 12:01 am (UTC)"I..." he starts, then has to swallow before starting again. "I... have to. No one else is here." His answer doesn't seem like enough, it's hardly a reason to him, but the blonde smiles at him, a small, delighted smile this time.
"A good reason."
Awwwww. I really, really love your Dick here. He's so noble and good and lonely without being mawkish about it...
Their taking turns surprising each other and being annoyed at being surprised was both funny and touching at the same time.
The kiss was incredible! So intense and delicate...*swoons*
He turns to look at him, and his eyes are filled with pain and world-weariness. But then they brighten. "It will be worth it."
Gorgeous, Star! Just gorgeous! Imagining Legolas glowing in the grimy streets of Gotham has totally made my day! I love this story!
Two tiny typo catches: "He's defiantly glowing now, and the beauty of it and him take his breath away," should be "definitely" and "My heart is going to be scared again." should be "scarred." Which is another very beautiful line, by the way!