You amazingly described Bruce’s wandering trying to find the monster. And the description of the cave and Bruce’s feelings when he had found Clark were so wonderfully written.
I'm really glad you liked those parts, Bruce wondering around, not quite sure what to do, lol. And seeing Clark for the first time, that must be incredible. :p
Poor Clark. He had to be so scared. *Hugs him*
He was! He was convinced that Bruce was going to try and kill him... *huggles him* Fortunately, Bruce could convince him that he wasn't!
I love the idea of Bruce helping Clark learn how to control his powers! I'm not sure why it appeals to me so much, lol. And Sir Kal! Yes. *grins*
I'm so happy you liked this story! Thank you for your wonderful comment, it made my day! :)
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Date: 2009-12-26 07:35 pm (UTC)You amazingly described Bruce’s wandering trying to find the monster. And the description of the cave and Bruce’s feelings when he had found Clark were so wonderfully written.
I'm really glad you liked those parts, Bruce wondering around, not quite sure what to do, lol. And seeing Clark for the first time, that must be incredible. :p
Poor Clark. He had to be so scared. *Hugs him*
He was! He was convinced that Bruce was going to try and kill him... *huggles him* Fortunately, Bruce could convince him that he wasn't!
I love the idea of Bruce helping Clark learn how to control his powers! I'm not sure why it appeals to me so much, lol. And Sir Kal! Yes. *grins*
I'm so happy you liked this story! Thank you for your wonderful comment, it made my day! :)