I love how you've written Harvey - you can sense that something's wrong, you can almost see it, but it's not fully there yet...just waiting to explode, I guess. That's got the makings of an excellent villain, I think. :D
Whee! I'm so glad you said that, because that is exactly what I wanted to get across! :)
Thank you for commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! :D
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Date: 2009-08-17 06:18 pm (UTC)Whee! I'm so glad you said that, because that is exactly what I wanted to get across! :)
Thank you for commenting! I'm so glad you liked it! :D