starsandsea: (Michael)
starsandsea ([personal profile] starsandsea) wrote2008-06-22 08:40 pm
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Drabble: Triad (3)

Title: Triad (3)
Rating: PG
Pairing: Clark/Bruce/Michael
Word Count: 194
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Companion to Triad 1 and Triad 2. For the amazing [livejournal.com profile] vigilante_wake! *snugs* Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct.



Clark watched his lovers sleeping. Bruce had his arm across his chest, lying on his front, his body pressed up close against him; Michael was in a similar position, curled around Bruce.

Clark sighed softly, seeing his breath rustle Bruce's hair slightly. Bruce was smiling in his sleep. Clark smiled upon it seeing it, such a rare sight, and yet more common now, around him and Michael at least.

He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day. A gentle, cool breeze caressed the bed, and both Bruce and Michael pressed closer to him. It was still dark in the room, but dawn was just beginning to lighten the darkness; brush strokes of color around the edges.

Clark sighed again, looking forward to the moment when the sun would rise and he could feel its touch upon his skin. But until then, he was content to watch as its fingers caressed his lovers, smoothing away any lines of stress or worry, hiding scars, or limning them with gold.

Clark smiled.
bradygirl_12: (Clark--Bruce Loving!)

[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2008-06-22 08:10 pm (UTC)(link)
What a beautiful piece, Star! :)

I love your descriptions of what Clark hears in the early morning, and the peacefulness he's found with his two lovers. I especially liked Bruce smiling in his sleep. :)

[identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com 2008-06-22 08:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww!!! ^_^ I love Clark watching Bruce and Michael sleep.

[identity profile] anthraciteowl.livejournal.com 2008-06-22 08:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful.

liming them with gold
I think you mean limning, here.

[identity profile] arch-schatten.livejournal.com 2008-06-22 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww! this was such a sweet piece. I love the image of the three of them sleeping together, or, Bruce and Michael sleeping, and Clark watching them. And I want to know what Bruce is dreaming of, is he's smiling! Tricky Bat, you never know with him X)

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-23 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I'm really glad you liked it, Brady! :D

I love your descriptions of what Clark hears in the early morning, and the peacefulness he's found with his two lovers. I especially liked Bruce smiling in his sleep. :)

LOL, I've found myself waking up very early recently, so a lot of descriptions of dawn are making their way into my stories! :) *pets Bruce* He needs to smile more! :p

Thank you for commenting, Brady! :D

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-23 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets them* They're all very cute! Clark especially. :p

I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you for commenting! :D

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-23 06:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for catching that! I'll go change that now. :)

And thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-23 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I'm really glad you liked it, Mina! :D

*pets them all* They were all feeling quite sappy! :P LOL, I think Bruce is dreaming of something quite devious... ;)

Thank you for commenting, Mina! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] genclay.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 10:07 am (UTC)(link)
Lovly lovly image :)

[identity profile] jij.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day.

Mmm, I love the mix of morning sounds and how much Clark enjoys them in this sweet quiet moment. You capture the hush of morning so well...

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets Clark* He was being very sweet here! :p

Thank you, Jen! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] meteor-seven.livejournal.com 2008-06-24 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
This is sweet :D
I found lots of threesome around the market these days...ppl are getting kinky, lol, but I like it as long as they are happy ;P

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-06-25 06:26 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, everyone is! :p

*pets Clark Bruce and Michael* These three are very happy! :D

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] vigilante-wake.livejournal.com 2008-07-03 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
You know who rules? You! For writing this!

You know who sucks? Me! For taking so long to reply!

For the amazing [livejournal.com profile] vigilante_wake! *snugs*

Meep! *blushes* Thank you so much! You've been so supportive for the past couple of months or so when I've been struggling with my real life. I feel so bad that I haven't had the time to really read or comment on fic, but I'm very lucky to have friends who love me anyway! Especially you! *hugs*

He gazed up at the high ceiling of Bruce's bedroom, hearing bats returning to their roost in the cave below them, hearing birds awakening, and sleepily starting to sing, welcoming a new day.

I think that's my favorite sentence from this fic! Your writing makes me visualize it so perfectly!

Clark sighed again, looking forward to the moment when the sun would rise and he could feel its touch upon his skin.

Clark/sun OTP. Seriously. I love reading about the effect the sunlight has on Superman. It's so sensual! And then the next sentence in that paragraph is so beautiful! The entire fic is lovely!

Thank you so much for writing this! These three pieces are really wonderful!

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2008-07-03 06:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Wake!!! *glomps* How are you? I hope things are less stressful now... *snugs*

Meep! *blushes* Thank you so much! You've been so supportive for the past couple of months or so when I've been struggling with my real life. I feel so bad that I haven't had the time to really read or comment on fic, but I'm very lucky to have friends who love me anyway! Especially you! *hugs*

*glomps* Don't feel bad - I know how crazy and stressful and difficult life has been for you, so there's no need! Besides, when you do comment, it just makes it extra special. :) Of course we all love you, silly, you're too awesome for us not to! :D

Clark/sun OTP. Seriously. I love reading about the effect the sunlight has on Superman. It's so sensual! And then the next sentence in that paragraph is so beautiful! The entire fic is lovely!

Hee, I love Clark/Sun! It's so pretty... *happy sigh* Whee! I'm so happy you liked this, Wake! :D *glomps again*

[identity profile] sasha-anu.livejournal.com 2009-01-04 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your description of the sunlight. I also love how willing Clark is to share first his lover (Bruce) and now the sunlight.

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2009-01-04 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Clark's a very giving guy! :p

Thank you for commenting, I'm really glad you liked it! :D