ext_5948 ([identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2011-02-10 04:55 am (UTC)

Oh, ohhhh, I love the structure of this one and what you do with it! You really use the phases of the moon so well to capture a different mood with each section. My favorite might be "First Quarter" because I'm such a sucker for parties with Clark and Bruce suffering through them and knowing that they're suffering, it makes me melt:

A sudden sigh beside him, and he turns, surprised, and yet not, to see Bruce standing next him, giving him a wry smile.

*melts* So lovely.

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