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starsandsea ([personal profile] starsandsea) wrote2010-07-18 06:41 pm

Drabble: I Get Weak

Title: I Get Weak
Rating: PGish
Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Word Count: 172
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: The third fic in the 'Shuffle I' series. For the [livejournal.com profile] worlds_finest Shuffle I Challenge - prompt 'I Get Weak'. Unbetaed, so point and I shall correct! :)



He used to be so strong. He was renowned for it, in fact. Both his physical strength and his immense willpower. But now... with one look from Clark he could feel his resolve weakening, crumbling away. His protests that he really had to get to a meeting or go out on patrol would be nodded at, then Clark would give him that look.

It didn't really matter that he would do the same to Clark. That was totally irrelevant, in his mind. But it seemed he could not deny his new lover anything. (Anything that did not get in the way of their duties to their cities and the JLA, of course. Neither of them would have stood for that.)

But now, as Bruce tried to rise from the bed, and Clark gave him that look: 'only five more minutes...'

Bruce cursed himself, then threw himself on top of Clark, kissing him deeply, their bodies responding. This, he muzzily thinks, might be the only time he doesn't mind being weak.

[identity profile] quiltdiva.livejournal.com 2010-07-18 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I love that Bruce can't help himself-- ha, ha! He doesn't ever realize that he is so used to denying himself, that it is really okay to indulge and be happy- just for a moment! I'm glad it's with Clark!

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, exactly! He needs to learn that it's okay to be happy, espeically with Clark. :)

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :)
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[personal profile] bradygirl_12 2010-07-18 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, Star! I'm amused at Bruce's 'weakness' and how Clark's got him wrapped around his little finger. Just what Bruce needs! ;)

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:15 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* It was fun to write Bruce being weak! :p

Thank you for commenting, Brady, I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] saavikam77.livejournal.com 2010-07-18 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Aww!! So sweet. That kind of weakness is the best kind. :)

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, it is.

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] fictionalknight.livejournal.com 2010-07-19 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
awwww! *squishes fic* This made me smile so very much! I love the idea that Clark would be Bruce's weakness - it's so very sweet. <3

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay, I'm really glad it could make you smile! :)

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] hitokaji.livejournal.com 2010-07-19 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
*squess*
Love the ending! So good to see Bruce being 'weak' once in a while. :)
And it's two times better when he is weak, with Clark.
Thank you for such a sweet story, my dear.

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
It is good to see Bruce being weak, letting himself be happy, and espeically with Clark! :)

Thank you for commenting, Hito! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com 2010-07-19 06:09 pm (UTC)(link)
But now, as Bruce tried to rise from the bed, and Clark gave him that look: 'only five more minutes...'
'only five more minutes...' - I so loved these words. (Made me smile. :))

then threw himself on top of Clark, kissing him deeply, their bodies responding.
AWWWWWW! That was wonderful! I think Clark as Bruce’s weakness is the best. :)

Thank you for the wonderful story! I enjoyed it! :)

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
AWWWWWW! That was wonderful! I think Clark as Bruce’s weakness is the best. :)

Each other is the best weakness they can have! :p

Thank you for commenting! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwww! That's so sweet, I love how Bruce defines it as weakness and then decides he doesn't much care, lol...

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-20 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* Bruce is being silly, thinking that it's a weakness! *pets him*

Thank you for commenting, Jen! I'm really glad you liked it! :D

[identity profile] eve-k.livejournal.com 2010-07-23 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah, because will-power is Bruce´s super power. Good for him his "Kryptonite" is love. :))

[identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com 2010-07-25 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, it is good for Bruce! *pets him*

Thank you for commenting, Eve! I'm really glad you liked this! :)