ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2009-08-19 11:55 am (UTC)

he had never really been horse riding for fun. Just because he could.
Oh Bruce! *Sigh* That’s great he has Clark to make him do something just for fun. :)

Because it was Clark.
I love this line.

and the farm boy had of course not decided on any of the things Bruce had been mentally preparing for, but something else entirely.
Well, the farm boy is clever and always knows what Bruce needs. *Smile*

I loved how you described Bruce’s preparing for the ride and his thoughts about his feelings, Clark and the horses. Bruce seeing that Clark looked more as Clark than Kal even without glasses – that was great!

Bruce felt himself smiling again, and relaxed, falling back into the semi-familiar rhythm, glorying in the knowledge that he wouldn't have to fall off, for once. Or not deliberately, at least.
Bruce being relaxed and smiling thanks to Clark - Perfect!

I enjoyed the story. :)
Thanks for sharing.
LS.

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