Wow! Definitely one of your best, Star!

I liked the characterizations and how Harvey was viewing things. He and Pete are so protective of their friends! And the black thing...poor Harvey. Soon enough he'll know the extent of that.

I feel sorry for both Pete and Harvey, being supplanted by Bruce and Clark. And, yes, Harvey, they boys have fallen for each other! ;)

But this was so interesting! Really good work! :)