I haven't seen The Batman/Superman Story yet, so I don't really know how it turned out, but this was great. :D
LOL, well, the episode was exactly like this. It even had them kissing at the end. *sighs* Okay, no, it didn't, but it should have. ;) It ended with Batman showing Superman around the Watchtower, so I only added a tiny bit on the end, really!
Although I think this is the first version of Superman I ... really didn't like all that much. From what I've seen of The Batman's trailers, the way you wrote Superman here fits perfectly with how he was portrayed on that show but ... argh, he's so arrogant and self-absorbed!
It was so very, very, strange writing him. I, um, may have made him more self-absorbed than he was in the show. *shrugs* Like a certain Bat, underneath he's a softie. ;)
I love how Clark slowly comes to appreciate the amazing things Bruce and his team do--and how he slowly learns to appreciate, um, teamwork as well. ^-^ Aww, and the way he feels so bad over hurting Bruce. :(
Yeah, whoo! :) Teamwork is always important. :p *pets Clark*
And I love love love Bruce here, how friendly and warm he is, always helping even when Clark tries to brush him off. And taking his kids flying! Awesome. :D
This Bruce is so strange too! Just...very strange all round, this fic is. lol. But, yeah, he's sweet! He helps Clark and takes the kids flying for the fun of it... *huggles him*
Anyway, this was a great take on this particular dynamic between them, and it was really wonderful how you moved them from being antagonistic to being partners to ... making out in the Watchtower!
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LOL, well, the episode was exactly like this. It even had them kissing at the end. *sighs* Okay, no, it didn't, but it should have. ;) It ended with Batman showing Superman around the Watchtower, so I only added a tiny bit on the end, really!
Although I think this is the first version of Superman I ... really didn't like all that much. From what I've seen of The Batman's trailers, the way you wrote Superman here fits perfectly with how he was portrayed on that show but ... argh, he's so arrogant and self-absorbed!
It was so very, very, strange writing him. I, um, may have made him more self-absorbed than he was in the show. *shrugs* Like a certain Bat, underneath he's a softie. ;)
I love how Clark slowly comes to appreciate the amazing things Bruce and his team do--and how he slowly learns to appreciate, um, teamwork as well. ^-^ Aww, and the way he feels so bad over hurting Bruce. :(
Yeah, whoo! :) Teamwork is always important. :p *pets Clark*
And I love love love Bruce here, how friendly and warm he is, always helping even when Clark tries to brush him off. And taking his kids flying! Awesome. :D
This Bruce is so strange too! Just...very strange all round, this fic is. lol. But, yeah, he's sweet! He helps Clark and takes the kids flying for the fun of it... *huggles him*
Anyway, this was a great take on this particular dynamic between them, and it was really wonderful how you moved them from being antagonistic to being partners to ... making out in the Watchtower!
Yay for making out in the Watchtower! LOL.
I'm really glad you liked it! :D