Woo! Okay, I haven't seen The Batman/Superman Story yet, so I don't really know how it turned out, but this was great. :D Although I think this is the first version of Superman I ... really didn't like all that much. From what I've seen of The Batman's trailers, the way you wrote Superman here fits perfectly with how he was portrayed on that show but ... argh, he's so arrogant and self-absorbed! I think he deserves to be with Luthor more than Bruce, lol.

You certainly fixed that as the story went on, though. :D I love how Clark slowly comes to appreciate the amazing things Bruce and his team do--and how he slowly learns to appreciate, um, teamwork as well. ^-^ Aww, and the way he feels so bad over hurting Bruce. :(

And I love love love Bruce here, how friendly and warm he is, always helping even when Clark tries to brush him off. And taking his kids flying! Awesome. :D

Anyway, this was a great take on this particular dynamic between them, and it was really wonderful how you moved them from being antagonistic to being partners to ... making out in the Watchtower! Yeah team! ^________^