ext_11878 ([identity profile] jij.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2007-08-09 12:42 am (UTC)

Oh, this was beautiful and very dreamy--the shifts in perspective and POV were gorgeously done to advance the development of the story.

So, this was what it felt like. He hadn't realized how... lonely it was.

Oh, that's so lovely! I expected him to be exhilarated and so this caught at my heart perfectly.

This was a perfect way to wake up this morning!

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