ext_5948 ([identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2012-12-14 01:38 am (UTC)

AHHHH AHHHHHHHHH THIS WAS MY PROMPT :D :D :D

I love how you used that line from the comics--it was such a sweet moment, and I just love to imagine Krypto getting to hear it over and over. I think his reaction to sand and "strange moving water" was one of my favorites, and the little bit of sadness about his parents and the farm was just the right amount of melancholy to keep the story grounded as it moves on to the fantastic end. Krypto's total physical delight at meeting Ace (I could so see him just wagging all over in joy) was so palpable and so sweet, and getting the plural form of that line was just the perfect ending.

Thank you so much!

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