Gotham was sparkling in the early morning sunlight. Well, Gotham and sunlight may not sound right, but I love the image of sparkling Gotham. :) And those lines about Wayne Tower were so wonderfully written!
Still... perhaps he could start to see the appeal Gotham had for Bruce. Well said. :)
The city gleamed for a moment below him, like a wink. Perfect!
I agree with those other two comments - that was brilliant! Wonderful job Star! Thank you so much for sharing this. :)
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Well, Gotham and sunlight may not sound right, but I love the image of sparkling Gotham. :) And those lines about Wayne Tower were so wonderfully written!
Still... perhaps he could start to see the appeal Gotham had for Bruce.
Well said. :)
The city gleamed for a moment below him, like a wink.
Perfect!
I agree with those other two comments - that was brilliant! Wonderful job Star! Thank you so much for sharing this. :)