ext_41769 ([identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2011-07-23 06:02 pm (UTC)

I loved the transition from the dream to waking up. Of course Bruce (aka world´s greatest detective) would sense that something is not right, but that moment of realisation, while the dream is still persisting that it´s reality, is heart wrenching.

I'm glad you liked that moment, I worried a little over if it worked, or not. It was sad to write; Bruce realizing that it was a dream just as he found happiness. :(

Thank you for commenting, Eve! I'm glad you liked this. :)


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