You really evoked Clark's loneliness and fear after what happened in Smallville. I like the way he and Bruce met on the beach and spent time together, and how Bruce was excited to learn the truth about Clark. The description of how they convinced Lex to lower the levies was lovely! :)
I tried quite hard to show how lonely Clark was, and how frightened, as well, but I think Bruce's reaction to finding out the truth has helped him a lot. And I'm really glad you liked the scene with Lex, too!
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You really evoked Clark's loneliness and fear after what happened in Smallville. I like the way he and Bruce met on the beach and spent time together, and how Bruce was excited to learn the truth about Clark. The description of how they convinced Lex to lower the levies was lovely! :)
I tried quite hard to show how lonely Clark was, and how frightened, as well, but I think Bruce's reaction to finding out the truth has helped him a lot. And I'm really glad you liked the scene with Lex, too!
Thank you for commenting, Brady! :D