bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (flower crowns 1))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2011-04-24 07:54 pm (UTC)

Absolutely lovely, Star! :)

You really evoked Clark's loneliness and fear after what happened in Smallville. I like the way he and Bruce met on the beach and spent time together, and how Bruce was excited to learn the truth about Clark. The description of how they convinced Lex to lower the levies was lovely! :)

One of your best! :)

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