ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2011-03-14 06:09 pm (UTC)

As Superman, it was seen clearly, through his dazzling smile.
I loved this line. "Dazzling smile" - yes, I think it’s so characteristic for Superman.

“Bruce.” Kal’s face looked pained.
Poor Kal.
He looked at Clark’s eyes.
Clark asking Bruce to kiss him. And Bruce looking to his eyes... and kissing him... that was so touching.

Beautifully written story Star! Thank you so much for sharing it.

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