ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2011-02-28 05:32 pm (UTC)

The Moon and Sun. Two thirds of the Trinity.
Great lines!

But right now, they were simply Bruce and Clark.
I liked that.

This is what makes Clark Superman, he thinks. This is what makes him the greatest hero of them all.
AWWWWW! I loved these Bruce’s thoughts. And he was right about Clark’s care and compassion, IMO.

They don't speak. But then, they've never needed words for this.
Perfect!

I loved it from the first sentence to the ending - the gentle Clark’s kiss and them two resting their foreheads against each other - that was amazing! You write my favorite characters wonderfully Star. Thank you for sharing this. :)

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