ext_41769 ([identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2010-12-21 07:45 pm (UTC)

I agree with Clark - that was a rather large thing. And it was nice to see how much Bruce trusted Clark. :)

It is a very large thing indeed!

The dialogue between them was wonderfully written! And I liked the "coded words of friendship" (and calling each other B and S :)).

Heh, my Bruce and Clark don't often call each other B and S, so it was a little odd writing them doing so, but it worked in this fic, I think.

"across the dark bay to Metropolis, gleaming in the distance" – I loved this line.

I was quite fond of that line myself! :)

Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Lis! I'm so glad you liked this! :D


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