ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2010-12-13 09:01 pm (UTC)

He really was purring, sounding more cat like than Selina ever had.
That was a wonderful line! :)

Bruce blinked, took a deep breath, then let it out as a sigh, before rolling over again.
I liked Bruce’s reaction.

A shadow flickered across the table, much too fast to be a cloud, and there was a cry of excitement from one of the women. "Superman!"
I don't blame them for the excitement at all! :D

"Uh... maybe... Maybe he's fighting one of those invisible guys?" Some one ventured.
Oh my! "invisible guys" - I had to smile.

"Wonder what that was all about?"
"Those guys at the Daily Planet will know. They know everything about Superman."

Perfect! :D

'It is theorized that under the influence of a yellow sun, an elaborate flying display will occur, as the Kryptonian in the Courting Cycle tries to attract a mate.'
WOW!

Why it was in the morning, Batman did not know, but judging from people's reactions it would not be happening again.
*grin*

"Kal? Are you all right?" Diana's eyes were concerned. J'onn just looked amused.
Diana being concerned and J’onn amused - I liked the difference in their reactions. And especially J'onn's amusement. :)

Bruce found the sight oddly endearing, so... Clark.
AWWWWWWW!

But Bruce stopped him before he could speak. "Clark - don't you know that Metropolis is where you are most likely to be abducted by an alien?"
Clark stared at him. Then lunged.

OMG! That was great. :D

"You're never going to let me forget this, are you?"
Bruce didn't reply, but then, his smirk said it all.

*grin* Poor Clark. :)

That was brilliant! I loved the story so much! Clark and Bruce were totally awesome in this. And I loved the way you mentioned the other characters in the story - the lines about them were always so fitting to their characters.
Excellent job!
Thank you very much for sharing this. :)

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