ext_41769 ([identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2010-07-25 06:05 pm (UTC)

Oooh, the Kal/Clark split here is kind of frightening but very believable too.

I had fun playing with that! I don't think Clark could go through with it, so he had Kal say everything, instead.

That line you picked out was my favorite in this story, I think!

Thank you for commenting, Jen, I'm really glad you liked it! :)


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