But then... A flying man in red and blue. The world watched, stunned, and Bruce felt everything click into place.
I loved to see the words „man in red and blue“ there. (I knew Bruce would be safe now.)

And Clark was... Clark.
Yay! That was nice. :)

But now, as Superman pulls him out of the water, fear in his face and eyes, Bruce finally makes his decision. He wants to live.
AWWWW – Perfect!
„fear in his face and eyes“ – yes, I think it was exactly what Bruce saw in that moment. And that sure helped to make his decision.

I loved this story! That was so wonderfully written! Thank you so much for sharing!