ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2010-05-02 08:41 pm (UTC)

Pieter shook his head, banishing those memories away. He could find a cure. He would be able to save Michael.
That was so heartbreaking story. Poor Pieter. First his mother died, even blaming him... and then Michael was dying too. But I love he didn’t give up, trying to find a cure.

There was no one else alive. He had been lucky. He sighed, saying a prayer for those he had been too late to save.
That sounded so desperate and hopeless.

Sudden noise. "Pieter!"
I was so glad for this line!

Beautifully written, Star! Although the stories were so sad, there always was a hope, a faith. I loved that!
Thank you very much for sharing this.


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