ext_41769 ([identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2009-10-27 07:24 pm (UTC)

Poor Barbara *Hugs her*

Poor Barbara was terrified when she didn't see Dick with them! *hugs her too*

And great speech of Bruce to his people! Excellently written!

Yay! I'm so glad you liked the speech, I was nervous about that. :)

Oh boy! Poor Bruce had to be scared seeing Harvey so angry.
But you described this part excellently! Bruce, wanting Harvey so desperately, Harvey’s rough words, his wounded face, Bruce’s reaction - that all was perfectly written!


Bruce just doesn't know what's happened! They don't really know anything about mental illnesses in the kinda of era this fic is set in, so Bruce is even more in the dark about it all! *hugs him*

O-ow – a cliffy ending! True, there wasn’t a cliffhanger in the previous chapter. :)

*grins* It was my last chance! You did count right, there is only more chapter! *sighs* I suppose I'd better get started on the next arc? LOL.

Thank you for you lovely comment! I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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