It was interesting to share Bruce’s feelings and thoughts in this chapter. He had so many difficult problems to resolve and you described excellently his thoughts, fears, doubts as well as his effort not to give up these feelings. Dick, Alfred, Harvey – all these characters were very important in this chapter and you wrote the interaction of everyone of them with Bruce brilliantly. I loved it!

*blushes* Yay! I'm really glad you liked it! :) *pets Bruce* He really does have a lot of things on his plate - everything is happening at once!

It was nice to see Dick and Bruce solved their problem successfully.

I was really glad too! :)

Jason and Cassandra leaving together was a great idea, IMO. I could see in one of previous chapters they both cooperated very well in the re-training of the soldiers.

They work really well together in this verse - they're going to be paired up a lot, I think. :)

Awww, Kal’s letter was so nice. And I loved the mention of Krypto. :)

*grins* I'm glad you liked it!

You know, it was interesting. Reading the Kal’s words about Diana, it occurred to me Bruce could be jealous. I don’t blame him. His thoughts about Kal needing an heir and Jor-El intentions – well, I understand it.

Bruce is certainly wary of Diana! And you are right, he is jealous, even if he doesn't realize it himself! *pets him*

And there was a evil cliffhanger! I had gone too long without having one. *evil laughter*

Thank you for your wonderful comment! It made my day! :D