ext_11878 ([identity profile] jij.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2008-06-09 06:00 am (UTC)

I'd totally forgotten that I had betaed this! I think I assumed you had posted it! *baps self*

It simply never occurred to me that he was lonely. That the bright one was the only one, apart from me, of course, to understand him.

I love this line--I think I pointed it out in beta!--because it's really such a huge concession on Gotham's part, to admit for even a moment that someone else could understand Bruce. That line alone gives me hope it what is a worrisome chapter! I love Gotham's intensity and fear so much, you write her so vividly...

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