I haven't commented on the past several chapters because it would simply be repetitive: Aw, poor Bruce. Aw, yay Kal&Bruce! (over and over...)

Anyway, I have only one criticism here: Realizing that you've used "lust staining his eyes" in most of these chapters, in this one you used "passion staining his eyes" instead. It's a powerful change, but all the same, I don't really think that passion can stain anything. If you change the emotion there, I think that the verb should be changed as well.

Apart from that tiny little thing, amazing story! I go now to read the other three chapters.