bradygirl_12: (superman--batman--hurt-comfort)
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2008-03-31 04:54 am (UTC)

Wonderfully-written, Star! You describe the surroundings with a deft hand, allowing us to taste and touch and smell, as well as see and hear.

Bruce's despair and defiance is beautifully-written, as his uncertainty about being sold, and his pain.

Best chapter yet!

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