bradygirl_12 (
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2008-03-31 04:54 am (UTC)
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Wonderfully-written, Star! You describe the surroundings with a deft hand, allowing us to taste and touch and smell, as well as see and hear.
Bruce's despair and defiance is beautifully-written, as his uncertainty about being sold, and his pain.
Best chapter yet!
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Bruce's despair and defiance is beautifully-written, as his uncertainty about being sold, and his pain.
Best chapter yet!