Gotham isn't going to take Clark's appearance well at all...

But I love the characterization of the city, this is a really cool POV you've got here. I like how she's a bit jealous of Gordon and definitely possessive of Bruce. It rings very true.

Thank you! :) My Gotham is very possessive of Bruce...

I will be posting the next chapter soonish! :) Maybe next week, or the week after...