Someone wrote in [personal profile] starsandsea 2007-06-18 01:25 am (UTC)

Such a sweet story. Of course, the man most involved is the last to know. Just one suggestion:
You wrote "he was meet with transparently fake innocence." Did you mean 'met'?
Again, great story!

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