starsandsea: (Superman)
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Title: Shadow and Light
Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Word Count: 106
Disclaimer: I own nothing
Author's Note: Happy Birthday to the wonderful [livejournal.com profile] mithen! I hope you have a great day. *hugs*





It was a clear dawn.

He felt Clark rise from the bed, cross to the balcony, then slip out with a gust of cool air.

Slowly, Bruce opened his eyes, squinted against the light. Saw Clark standing, waiting, entirely naked, felt his mouth go dry.

When the sun came over the horizon... It lit first Clark’s face, his hair turning almost yellow, his eyes gold. His skin seemed to glow as it absurbed the pure power of the sun.

Bruce closed his eyes, retreated further into his darkness, secure in the knowledge that Clark would soon return to their bed, bringing his own light with him.

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Date: 2014-06-04 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithen.livejournal.com
Mmmmm, what a lovely image and a study in perfect contrasts! Clark's hair becoming almost gold is just lovely, and somehow I really love the image of Bruce slipping further back into the darkness, knowing that Clark will join him soon, the perfect mingling of light and dark.

*happy sigh* As always, sharing a birthday with you always makes it twice as wonderful. Thank you!

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Date: 2014-06-05 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
Yay, I'm so glad you liked it! :D

Clark's hair becoming almost gold is just lovely, and somehow I really love the image of Bruce slipping further back into the darkness, knowing that Clark will join him soon, the perfect mingling of light and dark.

I loved the image of Clark's hair almost turning gold, it's so pretty! And yes, Bruce going back into the dark, knowing that Clark will join him bringing his light... *pets them*

*hugs* Thank you for making my birthday so much better, I'm so pleased we can share it! :)

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Date: 2014-06-04 02:38 pm (UTC)
bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (dance))
From: [personal profile] bradygirl_12
What beautiful imagery, Star! I love the trope of Clark absorbing his power from the sun. It never gets old. :) His hair turning yellow and his eyes gold are noteworthy. Such glow of good health! ;)

Bruce's thoughts are so rich and perfect, secure in his darkness because he knows that Clark will bring his light with him back to their bed.

You say so much in so few words! Quite a gift! :)

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Date: 2014-06-05 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
I love the trope of Clark absorbing his power from the sun. It never gets old. :) His hair turning yellow and his eyes gold are noteworthy. Such glow of good health! ;)

Isn't it so pretty? Clark so golden and sun god-y... :p

You say so much in so few words! Quite a gift! :)

*blushes* Aww, thank you, Brady! It's been quite a while since I've written these two... Maybe I'll start to be inspired again?

Thank you so much for your lovely comment! :)

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Date: 2014-06-05 04:44 pm (UTC)
bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (flower crowns 1))
From: [personal profile] bradygirl_12
Ha, sun god-y! I like that. :)

It'd be great if you could get inspired again. Never enough Clark/Bruce fic out there. :)

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Date: 2014-06-04 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com
It lit first Clark’s face, his hair turning almost yellow, his eyes gold. His skin seemed to glow as it absurbed the pure power of the sun.
I love this description. :)

Bruce closed his eyes, retreated further into his darkness, secure in the knowledge that Clark would soon return to their bed, bringing his own light with him.
AWWWW, Bruce knows Clark will always return back to him - this is perfect!

As Brady said - you managed to say so much just in a few words. And you did it excellently Star! I loved the story. Thank you so much for sharing it. :)
Edited Date: 2014-06-04 05:36 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2014-06-05 03:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starsandsea.livejournal.com
I love this description. :)

Ahh, I liked it a lot too! I could see the image of it so clearly...

AWWWW, Bruce knows Clark will always return back to him - this is perfect!

*grins* *hearts them both*

Yay, I'm so glad you liked this tiny story, Lis! Thank you so much for your sweet comment! *hugs*

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